Open Poetry #19 |
He |
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
HE Inspired by Tim’s "She" Long halls hear his step Memories are in cobwebs kept Illusion is still his to mirror He’d never held one love dearer… The midnight shadows are his cowl And lo, one would forsake his scowl Though still the night will see him prowl His search incomplete, he still avows To find that ever elusive quest That LOVE which still holds him best… |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Excellent Karilea....makes me think of the Phantom Lover of PiP...walking the blue halls. |
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Lia Fail Member
since 2002-02-26
Posts 80 |
this is great writing, loved the read. Lia |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
You're just outstanding, my friend. Always a pleasure to read your work. jwesley |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Just lovely. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oohhhhhh...I love this, yes, yes, may his search soon be complete and find she who belongs to his heart and may He and She become One! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! Youn have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is quite simply beautiful. Nan |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
*s I had to go read Tims first..both are wonderful M |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari darling sister of my heart this is such superb writing. Utterly utterly amazing writing it’s so full of beauty and is utterly utterly beautiful. You always are excellent in this you’ve proved, if it needed it, that you are an exceptional writer. This is an absolutely beautiful and perfect example of all your posts, perfectly divine I love it Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Exquisite response to Tim's 'She'. Stronge emotions here and very well done! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
So happy to be able to say ... I'm not the "He" in these thoughts |
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