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Rick
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0 posted 2002-03-02 05:43 AM



What is understanding, is it weakness is it might?
Is it saying yes at times when no would cause some petty fight?
Is it changing ways with others to walk that mile they walk?
Is it giving time and patience, to share ones heart and talk?

Is it giving up ones pleasure so then there’ll be a smile?
Is it giving up ones leisure so peace shall last a while?
Is it sharing with another, to hear their point of view?
Is it waking every morning with selfless things to do?

Is it giving one encouragement, a hug to sooth a tear?
Is it thinking not of selfish things, but others through the year?
Is it being more that person that you wish you could be?
Obeying all the rightful things and helping people see?

Is it knowledge of the Bible, of news that fills the week?
Is it knowing all the Authors and all the words they speak?
Is it fluent speaking on a view of which just few do know?
The integrated workings of a thing that will not go?

Understanding means so many things, for one could not deny
When people do and try to, the days with ease go by
We may not do it always, or think just how we could
For sometimes understanding does not mean what it should

Understanding should be two way, a little give and take
Being diplomatic in the judgments that we make
Being an all rounder, with knowledge here and there
Trying to be righteous and trying to be fair



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Rex Allen McCoy
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1 posted 2002-03-02 06:27 AM


I'll agree to that
and that's the way to say it ... straight out

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2002-03-02 06:56 AM


My exact feeings..give and take..and when it is no longer there ..it is time to walk away.

A perfect poem to be my first read today, Rick..made me smile *s

Maureen

Kelley_Edwards
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3 posted 2002-03-02 10:24 AM


It is a crime that this is not the norm, and how utterly sad it is not. Exceptionally insightful and well said.
Martie
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4 posted 2002-03-02 10:31 AM


Rick

There are many words of wisdom in this wonderful poem!

Sunshine
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5 posted 2002-03-02 10:45 AM



Understanding is reading this, and nodding, yes....

thank you for writing my credo...what we try to do...quietly...no matter what...

thank you, Rick...

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6 posted 2002-03-02 12:42 PM


"Understanding should be two way, a little give and take
Being diplomatic in the judgments that we make
Being an all rounder, with knowledge here and there
Trying to be righteous and trying to be fair"




(sigh) Oh my gosh, this is a wonderfully thought-provoking poem, sweet friend, I believe that understanding all revolves around being fair and judgemental while also being considerate and relating in a compassionate sense while not overindulging someone! (big huggsssssss) I think there can be many answers to understanding, sweet friend, we all love you so much, this is outstanding! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rick, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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7 posted 2002-03-02 12:49 PM


Rick,  your poem speaks volumes about that
one word....IF we all could live that way..
we wouldn't have to write poetry that is
about heartbreak...etc...  Thanx for this..

Suetang
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8 posted 2002-04-02 12:31 PM


Hello Rick

Your words certainly do speak volumes and leave me in awe at the intensity of your words.  So many important messages you have given us.

Take care........Sue

Suetang

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