Open Poetry #19 |
I want Interloper's Challenge |
Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I want interloper's challenge To have people share desire I don't want to give advice I just want their passion's fire To keep me warm through winter's chill I'll take his challenge steal its thrill I want interlopers challenge Have poets whisper in my ear Telling me their sweet desires Whispering and drawing near And if I should give advice I'd be gentle I'd be nice I want interlopers challenge I would play at doctor love I want to hear the sacred yearnings Of a heart that soars above If you share from secrets well I promise you that I won't tell Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Keth darling sister of my heart and keeper of the dreamers secrets, you know I love this, NO ONE writes these better absolutely no one. Fabulous utterly utterly fabulous. I want you to write forever more I want you to fly to simply soar To wrap your soul in dreams desire To cede your heart to love’s fire To stir me always with your voice To always have another choice I want you to listen to your heart To never feel you’ve drifted apart Each if these I want for you For you are loving good and true You know I absolutely love this darling heart, as always perfect writing Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very nice Keth..He will certainly respond with desireous words I am sure ..I wonder how I can get his challenge ...hmmmmm am thinking *s Maureen |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I like the twist you gave his challenge very nicely done..... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(giggles in delight) Ooohhhhhhh...I wonder how Doctor Love will respond to this one, this is a very interesting and wonderful new matter in the challenge! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful and creative, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kethry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Why don't you be the lady doctor and give him some advice.... A taste of his own medicine might be fun~ I would think the good doctor still needs a perscription of love potion~ Cute poem Kethry~ |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
ah, but the whispers in the ear are shouts that cannot be voiced silent but deadly and your poem is RightOn! tSR |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
So Keth, you want to be a Medicine Woman of love. Well, I think you would be great. Of course you don't want me on your couch, I would be there for days, and you wouldn't be able to help all of your other clients.lol Dave |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I really enjoyed this one. Keth... and if you take my little love pills your heart will mend but I'll send you a bill copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Ha ha, seems like a tough job sure you want it? I would whisper all my secrets to you, but they are all poured out all over these pages already. I'm lonely, is that something you can help? Sandra |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Of course, I cannot share the private thoughts of my patients ... only their postings Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Kethry, perhaps the gentlemen of Passions could come to you with their ailments and you could respond with a prescription for them. Good idea and wonderful write! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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