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RMW
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since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

0 posted 2002-03-02 12:31 PM

A Pair of Hearts

I drew two hearts upon the window,
imperfect though they seemed to look,
a waitress smiled,
and then I knew
that hope can never be stood up.

RMW

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

1 posted 2002-03-02 12:37 PM

This is incredible...but then poems made of the easiest moments always are.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

2 posted 2002-03-02 12:37 PM

Bob

So simple, yet so profound. Much enjoyed!

RMW
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since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

3 posted 2002-03-02 12:39 PM

Duncan and Martie...thank you, folks. What are you all doing up so late?

Lia Fail
Member

since 2002-02-26

Posts 80

4 posted 2002-03-02 12:41 PM

very nice, short but especialy sweeeet!
Lia

RMW
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since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

5 posted 2002-03-02 12:45 PM

Thank you, Lia. Bob

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2002-03-02 01:39 AM

Enjoyed...James

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

7 posted 2002-03-02 07:43 AM

Volumes spoken in so few words...

loved this, & you know why!

*smiles*
~Tier

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2002-03-02 08:18 AM

A frosty window, surely, for the hearts to show; then the sun came out, and glimmered through...

beautiful Robert! So good to see you've come home!

Spirit Of Twilight
Member

since 2002-01-11

Posts 116
India

9 posted 2002-03-02 11:11 AM

This is incredibly pretty and rare. It's amazing how you turn a sweet little personal moment into this lovely and profound poem!
Keep writing!
Neha

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

10 posted 2002-03-02 12:12 PM

Perfect... am saving this one for those days when ..

~smiling
M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

11 posted 2002-03-02 02:03 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this shines with such hopeful sweet brevity, sweet friend, may this pair of hearts unite and feel joy in each other! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, we've all missed you and your wonderful words so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

12 posted 2002-03-02 03:19 PM

...Ooooh WOW!!...

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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