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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
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 And when you linger past the moment stay through the ache you touch me reason fades understanding nothing feeling everything the way you move me the way you reach that place even I didn’t know was real was a part of me…. in the silence of that instant when you stand time still in the hush of your eyes our souls collide becoming yin to yang infinity melts as destiny guides fate subsides and we pretend that we don’t feel that we don’t need or love in this reality ~SEA~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oooohhhhhhh...this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I believe there is no feeling more happier than feeling nirvana with the one you love and finding that afterglow in love forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Susan, one of your finest pieces to date, and that is saying A LOT. I really loved this...your feelings are extremely intense and you left a few tears in my eyes. thank you as always for posting such beautiful images with your words. take care sweet friend. amy "Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Beautiful writing Sea Seems like I've been there a couple times before enjoyed |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
in the silence of that instant when you stand time still in the hush of your eyes our souls collide ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Perfectly beautiful Sue...as is the pic.! Enjoyed this so much tonight. Look at you go girl! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And when you linger past the moment stay through the ache you touch me reason fades understanding nothing feeling everything the way you move me the way you reach that place even I didn't know was real was a part of me. in the silence of that instant when you stand time still in the hush of your eyes ================================== your writing reaches new depths of expression with each sharing....and you know I'm feeling this one ... and Im begining to think Steve Hanks paints these just for you  Dont walk before me, lord knows I cant follow |
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Lia Fail Member
since 2002-02-26
Posts 80 |
this is a beautiful post. Lia |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is a gorgeous poem, Sue...I really love the way you shaped it to look like a candle. in the silence of that instant when you stand time still in the hush of your eyes our souls collide becoming yin to yang infinity melts copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Susan, you are such a hopeless romantic and I love it! Beautiful, my friend! (((hugs))) me PS...I have a drop of rain in my hand Michael Auguste~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sea Beautiful writing! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe darling girl this is awesome, I mean it, this is an incredible piece of writing, utterly utterly amazing writing it’s so full of beauty and is utterly utterly beautiful. You always excel in this you’ve proved, if it needed it, that you are an exceptional writer. This is an absolutely beautiful and perfect example of all your posts, perfect I love it  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Noah~ thank you Amy~ you are so awesome! Thank you Rex~ thanks for knowing Nancy~ thank you very much Janet~ from you that is such high praise, thank you, I love his paintings He is amazing Lia~ thank you Madame~ thank you, I hadn’t realized it looked like a candle! That’s cool Michael~ thanks sweetie, hold onto that drop Martie~ that is so nice of you! thank you Mushy~ you are so nice to me, thank you |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I love the way this flows, with gentle passion. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Not many poems hook me with the first few lines like this one did, Susan. I could honestly feel every word of it, up until the last 4 lines or so. Then ya kinda lost me. lol Cowboy |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Midnitesun~ thank you very much Cowboy ~ it's about a moment when someone touches(emotionally)you, and all that you feel, when you aren't supposed to feel it....(does that help?) I'm glad you liked most of it LOL thank you |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
L • O • V • E • L • Y!!!!!!writing!!!!!!! |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
oh yeah, and thanks for including the picture of me.... hehe.... i'm flattered!! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
And when you linger past the moment stay through the ache you touch me reason fades understanding nothing feeling everything the way you move me the way you reach that place even I didn’t know was real was a part of me…. very beautiful... M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Thanks Susan, I get it now. Never been too good with that stuff you're not supposed to feel...I always seem to feel it, anyway. lol |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Beautiful words and write from the soul. One of your best pieces. Hugs On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
SEA, this brought tears to my eyes for it was so achingly stunning. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Doreen~ you are awesome, thank you Maureen~ thank you very much Cowboy ~ that is just it, I feel it too, no matter what I try to do to block it out, I still feel it, thank you G S~ that is very nice of you, thank you Kethry~ wow, that is cool thank you |
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