Open Poetry #19 |
Seisms A Little Hot!! |
Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Center to center the earth moves in tremulous seisms. Soul to soul our bodies move in climatic pulsations. The Earth shudders and quakes. And, we tremble and shiver at loving's fulfillment. The center and the Earth becoming one; and we move into each other, ~~~connecting, becoming one body. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Ivy rose, this is awesome. a wonderful creative poem. floria Floria |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Ooohhhhhh...this is very beautifully sensual, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always shine with the flame of passion and romance! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is outstanding! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Beautiful Ivy...very...and warm too.... |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Ivy Rose- Very beautiful write. I enjoyed this. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Lia Fail Member
since 2002-02-26
Posts 80 |
Beautifuly written, i could feel the passion. wonderful imagery. Lia |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
this should have an earthquake alert IvyRose. It was so moving. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very well and uniquely done Ivy. And, yep...could easily be construed as...HOT! Wonderful... jwesley |
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