Open Poetry #19 |
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Pockets Full of Sand |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California ![]() |
Pocketfuls of Sand....just for the silly of it Pocketfuls of sand remember the cold day when water took the beach and my favorite shoe out into the blue Find that maverick wave did I, all drenched and flailing, twirling turning tangle clutching shoe as if to boat attached before I was blobbed in sand on back Just as the sun noticed me and turned on its warm |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh, I'm cold and it's supposed to get colder, and this brings thoughts of warm. Thank you. Nan |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Just as the sun noticed me and turned on its warm ================================== your "silly" makes me smile...and feel the warm. a whimsy moment captured in your words. I could use a pocketful of sand about now ![]() |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Marti Hi there it’s Krissy (Mushy’s daughter) this is a wonderful read very visual I like this a lot. I can see you are a good writer. I do know I’ll be looking out for your writing ![]() ![]() ![]() Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Yes this makes me feel good because it is cold here. brrrrr. floria Floria |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) Ooohhhhhh...this is sooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this makes me wish I was on the beach right about now with the one I love! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Martie, I wish I could walk the beach right now. This isn't so silly, but is sure sweet. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Martie, this is like a breath of fresh air! What I would give to walk along the beach in the warm sun right now! Spring can't be too far behind, right? ~Hugs for this happy one, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I've been missing the water like crazy lately, and now this just adds to it.... ![]() ![]() |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Martie - oooooh!!! It's that very first splash of icy water - the one that takes your breath away. After that...it's just plain refreshing. Love this. Chris ![]() Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
LOL Cute poem, Martie! Hmmmmm.....my thoughts are turning once again to the ocean! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
ROTF...I'm good for something! ![]() |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Martie, ah for a warm beach right now even one with dratted sand. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I want the sun's warm... Send some this way??.. ![]() |
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