Open Poetry #19 |
Dear Doctor Love…. (challenge) |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Dear Doctor Love…. I hear you might have the cure for the love disease so I’m sending you a list of my ailments if you could help me please…. I need a hundred thousand years to be by someone’s side a flowing bed to show the ripples in a daily tide I’d like while I’m still young to have a strong hand to hold that very same gentle strength wrinkling with me when I am old determination, drive, and ambition one to admit they have done wrong with verbal admission someone to say what they mean and mean what they say standing side by side through our bad days who doesn’t mind the mundane not looking for a thrill who sees I have my own aspirations, needs and a will who will look beyond what I look like into who I am who is not always testing me like I am the final exam someone who understands romance can be a yellow rose or doing laundry with me I do not look for perfection I do not find it within myself but I don’t want to be a puppet or sitting on this shelf so doctor, doctor for this is there a miracle or a cure or shall I always live alone and learn how to endure signed…..heartsick "Pour yourself thick, when it is you, that you spread." |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I like this. If, your doctor has a cure, tell him I need some help, too. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Hey Dr. Love, I'll take one of everything that 1slick wants. LOL.. Hope we both get it 1 slick and this is a very well written poem. good expression, yearning, floria Floria |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
This is REALLY good : ) |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(BIG HUGGGSSSSSSSSS) Oh Helen, I know deep down with all my heart you will find a love that will treat you with respect and sincerity and fill your heart with happiness forever! (kiss on cheek) I too would love to order a prescription of this, Doctor Love, I just know he will offer you wonderful advice! We all love you so much, sweet friend, my thoughts are with you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I love this!! Library bound. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Prescription written. Now you must fill it Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
"who is not always testing me like I am the final exam someone who understands romance can be a yellow rose or doing laundry with me" ------------------------ Perhaps I need to send one as well....perhaps he'd give the right prescription.. Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Good one Helen! Now I must be off to read your prescription. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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