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Doctor Love's Prescription for Lauren (Greeneyes)
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Doctor Love's Prescription for Lauren (Greeneyes) |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
come into my arms we will dance among nature and walk on the shore we will saddle up riding your beloved mounts enjoying sunsets I lean from saddle picking wildflowers for you not just showing off I drown in your eyes marveling at merriment happily dancing your voice comforts me your songs make me feel unique when you sing to me we dream of our ranch and of this true love we share best friends for all time I know you are there and now we must wait my love 'til the time we meet In response to:Thoughts Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh I have read Laurens beautiful poem, and this is a wonderful response, You do this so so well interloper. floria Floria |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  YAY!!! Ooohhhhhhh...this is such wonderful advice for our wonderful sweet friend Lauren, sweet friend, I know that she will always hold this dream of the ranch close and soon she will be swept off her feet by the cowboy of her dreams! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) Follow the doctors orders, sweet Lauren, this is wonderful! We all love you so much, Doctor Love, this is another wonderful miracle cure! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I lean from saddle picking wildflowers for you not just showing off ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Interloper this is such a good prescription for Lauren. I especially liked and smiled at the Senryu above...you must have long arms or it's a short horse. Very well done! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Nancy, Don't you know we Texans are born in the saddle. Shux, if'n we cain't pick up a prairie hen at full gallop with our bare hands, we aren't considered horsefolk. Of course, anyone can rope a critter on the ground, but that's just too easy ... kinda like bein' and Oklahoma cowboy. So, as you can see, plucking a few posies frum the saddle is child's play fer us Texans Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Interloper~ I will take all the above, does that come in Pill form???  thank you for the challenge to produce the words...I love this and will treasure it always...  Lauren~ Greeneyes~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lauren, Interloper is a pill...does that count?  Well done sir. But I'm thinking you used crib notes and wondered if that's legal? |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Laughing at Larry.. if Interloper is a Pill.. I would rush to my pharmacy to get refill after refill. *s M |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I'm with nakd over there, if that comes in a pill Id be first in line for the refills.... Lauren~ Greeneyes~ Step through the barrier of my mind, enter my soul, feel my desire, let my eyes guide you into the shadows of my heart [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (03-02-2002 01:33 PM).] |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
This was very sweet DocLuv I especially liked... "best friends for all time" *~coco~* |
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