Open Poetry #19 |
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Slow Dancing (in celebration of our six month anniversary) |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC ![]() |
Slow Dancing AMK 3/01/02 Pulling you out onto the dance floor I hold you tight against me Feeling the flow of the music I've never felt more free You are the love of my life With you is where I always want to be As the music just takes us far away Your beautiful face is all I can see I want to slow dance with you Today and forevermore For it's with you my sweet baby That to the heavens I can soar I didn't know love Until the music began to play As thousands of notes fill the air With you is where I will stay Your eyes so enchanting As I pull you even closer still Your lips now tracing over mine I swear as God as my witness I've never felt a love more real A thousand symphonies now are playing They are celebrating this new found love As you and I continue to slow dance here on Earth An angel cries happy tears from above "Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
That last line blew me away Aimster, I wish you many more months and years of happiness. floria Floria |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Amy darling lil sis of my heart this is one of your utter utter best poems darling as always you write with utter wonder, your pen is dipped into magic dust I think. And this caught me within it and carried me on This is one of your finest poems ever it shines like a jewel in an ocean of mediocrity. Not that your work is ever mediocre it isn’t and never has been but this is utterly wonderfully good. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"I didn't know love Until the music began to play As thousands of notes fill the air With you is where I will stay Your eyes so enchanting As I pull you even closer still Your lips now tracing over mine I swear as God as my witness I've never felt a love more real A thousand symphonies now are playing They are celebrating this new found love As you and I continue to slow dance here on Earth An angel cries happy tears from above" ![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, this part made me cry to feel how beautiful and happy you are and the love that shines from your golden heart! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may you be married in a lifetime of loves happiness! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
I want to slow dance with you Today and forevermore For it's with you my sweet baby That to the heavens I can soar I didn't know love Until the music began to play As thousands of notes fill the air With you is where I will stay Your eyes so enchanting As I pull you even closer still Your lips now tracing over mine I swear as God as my witness I've never felt a love more real ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Congrats on your 6 months I just had my 25th.. This is how we spent it too : ) |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Auntie Amy Oh this is really lovely, I’ve read quite a few of your older poems and I read one the other day that I thought was your best, now I think this is. You’re just getting better. Beautiful words and lovely flowing style you certainly can write. I like this I really do ![]() ![]() ![]() Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Time flies when your in Heaven on Earth. ![]() Happy Anniversary Amy-girl!! ![]() |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Happy Anniversary Amy!!! the feeling here, so happy and loving....how wonderful ![]() ![]() |
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