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Guided By Your Love
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Guided By Your Love |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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Even though you've been gone for nearly three years I still see your spirit in many shapes and forms I see you in the low lying mist that covers the lake - so calm and comforting is this image Your spirit soars on the wings of a golden eagle - so majestic and so graceful in flight I see your image reflected in the golden glow of the sunset as it spreads like a blanket across the sea You come to me in my dreams bringing comfort and warmth to my aching heart You guide me through my pen as I write my words of love But mostly I feel you inside my heart You remain my guiding light and a constant source of inspiration 'tho the light sometimes flickers this flame of eternal love I hold for you will never dim * * * * * Written in honour of the great love I felt and still feel for my late father. May he rest in peace and keep a place for me under the birch tree. Suetang |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"You come to me in my dreams bringing comfort and warmth to my aching heart You guide me through my pen as I write my words of love But mostly I feel you inside my heart You remain my guiding light and a constant source of inspiration 'tho the light sometimes flickers this flame of eternal love I hold for you will never dim"  (BIG HUGGGSSSSSSS) God Bless You, sweet friend, my heart cries out to your loss but I know deep down from the bottom of my heart your father will never forget you and will always love you so so much, for he will always guide you with his love from up above! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, this one made me cry, we all love you so so much! You have such a loving and compassionate heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sue, I knew before I read your explanation. I really like the poetry you write...but especially the poetry you write in memory of your father. Don't stop.  |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Lovely Sue..my dad has been gone three years too...beautiful words...hugs ~Vic |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Sue, this was a extremely heartwarming poem to your Dad, who holds your love eternally. You keep him in your heart and by sharing your words of love for him I almost feel like I am getting to know him. How loving and lovely this was. ~* Imagination is more important than knowledge *~ |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
I really admire your love for him Sue, That is how I feel about my mom. You were fortunate to have love from such a wonderful father, this is a great tribute to him. floria Floria |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Your Father was as lucky as you... His love for you and your love for him..... what an honor |
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