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B is Better ( Extended ) (Challenge )
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B is Better ( Extended ) (Challenge ) |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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bees buzz beneath better business bureaus: blow baby bubbles blind brothers bellow below bloated boats blow busted brine bubbles blistered beachcomber beau balks, blows bad benign bubbles bare-breasted binkini blonds bore bulbous bodkins burst bungled blown bubbles breast-fed brats banter, burp beneath bibs blow boisterous bubbles bug-eyed bodyguards break basic barriers burst bag balloons, blink blatantly, blow behemoth-like bubbles! [This message has been edited by ecrivan (02-28-2002 10:58 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
this ones great E..*s M |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
unhuh!! Yep! And I'm still trying to say it, least wise write it... Excellent my friend. jwesley |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Hey does take long to bring bees to beatlejuice...hehe  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  BRAVO!!! YOU'VE DONE IT AGAIN, THIS IS ANOTHER MARVELOUS REPLY TO THE CHALLENGE!!! (big hugggssssss) This somehow reminded me of a simile in William Shakespeare's "All's Well That Ends Well" where he uses honeybees as a comparison to the laborers of the world and to the bureaucracy! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is outstanding! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
great thought there Noah, thanks for clicking in  |
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