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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2002-02-28 06:33 PM

If this Is a song,
I will be song
And sing It
every word to you,
If this Is love
I would be your love
I would be your love
My heart would ring
When your love Is so sweet
If this book
I write down
a few pages of a line
And let you know
this Is not a dream
But It Is a reality
Let your heart know
This Is a love
A dream come true,
Dream coming true,
If this Is love
I would sing my heart away
If this river so deep,
So deep,
And love so sweet,
If this love was right
And never been wrong
I would be strong
And would be right
betweeb us,
If this Is a love
A love
dream coming true
If this Is the night
You would be stars
so bright
If this Is everything.....

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

1 posted 2002-02-28 06:37 PM

Very nice Vandana, very sensitive and much feeling here, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2002-02-28 07:25 PM

If this book
I write down
a few pages of a line
And let you know
this Is not a dream
But It Is a reality
Let your heart know
=============================
If this Is the night
You would be stars
so bright
If this Is everything.....
===============================

Vandana...you write with so much heart...
this is lovely, wonderful analogies...
I hope you gave it to your someone special.

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

3 posted 2002-02-28 08:14 PM

This should be a song!!!

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2002-02-28 08:20 PM

If a song
sing it pure
In this song
love can endure

In your song
in love sung
not very long
but truly sung.

Nice poem...sing it...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-02-28 08:41 PM

Sing it out Vandana!
This is beautiful and straight from your heart. Enjoyed so much!

~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

6 posted 2002-02-28 09:26 PM

Very tender my friend...enjoyed reading it....

jwesley

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-02-28 09:31 PM

(smiles) YAY!!! Ooohhhhhh...I sure hope this is a dream come true for you, sweet friend, you deserve to be happy forever and I wish this true love to forever fill your heart! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is soooooo beautifully sensitive! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Naoh Eaton

GenXer
Senior Member

since 2001-12-15

Posts 583
USA

8 posted 2002-02-28 11:13 PM

Vandana - Love is definitely a dream come true. Nice writing.

Dave

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

9 posted 2002-03-01 12:58 PM

much enjoyed vandana!

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

10 posted 2002-03-01 01:00 AM

Absolutely flowed...like a song!

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

11 posted 2002-03-02 04:21 AM

vandana-
This is very beautiful, and yes...it flows
like a song.
I enjoyed this.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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