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Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

0 posted 2002-02-28 04:38 PM

If the World Stopped
AMK
2/28/02

If the world was to stop tommorrow
And I could only have one thing in this life
I would choose you my darling
To have and behold...to be my lovely wife

You've given me more than you know
As a lover and a friend
Filling my days with love and laughter
Best friend and lover completes the perfect blend

The sun could refuse to shine
Blue skies could turn gray
None of that would matter
As long as with me you'd stay

If suddenly the world stopped turning
The stars no longer came out at night
Tis would not matter to me
For in your eyes, I see love's light

You've brought me a joy I never knew
Completing parts of me that were not whole
I love you my sweet darling
Heart and soul

"Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't
mean they don't love you with all they have"

[This message has been edited by Aimster (02-28-2002 04:40 PM).]

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2002-02-28 04:48 PM

If suddenly the world stopped turning
The stars no longer came out at night
Tis would not matter to me
For in your eyes, I see love's light
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Love looks good on ya Amy-girl ...
heres to dreams come true and happy endings beyond poetry. You deserve nothing less.
heart-hugs sunshine-girlie

jm

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-02-28 04:49 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, you are soooooo romantic, sweet friend, I know just how you feel and if I had just one thing in the world, it would be my sweet heavenly Gwenevere Joanna! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always make me smile! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

3 posted 2002-02-28 06:08 PM

enjoyed

Krissy
Senior Member

since 2002-02-22

Posts 556
kent England

4 posted 2002-02-28 06:39 PM

Amy hi there this is really one of your best, it is exactly how you feel about the one. I’m assuming that it is since I haven’t found the one, but be that as it may, this is really heart-stoppingly lovely. Beautiful flow and a wonderful finish. Well written dear friend, very well written. You have definitely grown as a poetess.

Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

5 posted 2002-02-28 07:43 PM

Amy,

You write love so well. Your poems always touch my heart and make me smile. I'm so glad you are happy

I hope the love you found shines for an eternity.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Hopefloats
Junior Member

since 2001-10-30

Posts 26
NH

6 posted 2002-02-28 08:44 PM

I can relate so well as I finally found that once in a lifetime love...I really enjoyed this one, and the words said alot!!

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

7 posted 2002-02-28 10:18 PM

have you asked yet?!

Amy, this is so loving....so sweet....
yeah, love looks real good on you

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

8 posted 2002-03-01 11:03 AM

Amy darling lil sis of my heart this is sooooooo incredibly amazing I can’t tell you how amazingly good this is, it’s brilliant just as you are. So full of love here you really shine brightly darling heart.

Do you know you are amazingly talented? Of course you don’t but you are indeed.

Truly outstanding writing and I love it love it love it.

As I’ve said before you darling girl write so well, and this is beautiful really beautiful.

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

9 posted 2002-03-01 11:24 AM

I truly thank each of you for
your beautiful comments to my work
and for taking the time to read. Your
words as always mean everything to me!
So thank you all from the bottom of
my heart. Take care and God Bless you
all.

Love,
Amy

"Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't
mean they don't love you with all they have"

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

10 posted 2002-03-02 05:24 AM

Amy-
Very beautiful and tender sentiments from your heart.
I wish you the best.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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