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Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

0 posted 2002-02-15 01:35 PM

In Meadow Fair

Upon my back in meadow fair
where sun blown breezes lift my hair
I dream, my lover, still unknown,
to me, in clouds, of white be shown

Adrift on winds is flower’s scent
perfumes my thoughts as I invent
A spell is cast on summer noon
filling the air with magic tune

Release of needs from deep within
as webs of fantasy I spin
Weaving them on a golden loom
with threads of passion I consume

Such rainbow hues of love I wove
within the silent forest grove
While nature all around me played
until the setting sun I stayed

So many years have come and gone
and yet I dream until the dawn
Still of a lover never seen
just like when I was once a teen

Karen Torbiak 2002©

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

[This message has been edited by Startime (02-15-2002 05:54 PM).]

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

1 posted 2002-02-15 01:51 PM

Enjoyed this word weaving,
You give warm thoughts on a winter’s day,
Bringing summertime and youth back into play.
Nice that you never stopped believing.

Gloom

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2002-02-15 01:53 PM

Karen, again your words are beautiful. Hugs to you. *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

3 posted 2002-02-15 01:57 PM

Karen, this is soooo beautiful. I pray that God will take His golden needle and silver thread and weave for you the perfect spirit of man, to send to you, soon. God wants you to have a perfect gift. Look up to the stars, for your man is there awaiting your cry. And soon he will come to you in a surprise heated bolt of lightning. Have faith, dear.

((Karen))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

4 posted 2002-02-15 01:57 PM

Karen, this is soooo beautiful. I pray that God will take His golden needle and silver thread and weave for you the perfect spirit of man, to send to you, soon. God wants you to have a perfect gift. Look up to the stars, for your man is there awaiting your cry. And soon he will come to you in a surprise heated bolt of lightning. Have faith, dear.

((Karen))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2002-02-15 02:13 PM

Karen - you write your thoughts, sad at times, but a true romantic you are...

BC

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

6 posted 2002-02-15 06:59 PM

A beautiful penning. Enjoyed the read of an excellent poem. Take care, Tim

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2002-02-15 08:12 PM

I feel the serenity and the loneliness of
this poem...You pen these feelings with such
ease and perfection.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2002-02-15 08:43 PM

Karen, this is a wonderful poem to read aloud! Well done!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2002-02-15 09:36 PM

Excellent writing Karen...James

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

10 posted 2002-02-15 09:47 PM

This is beautiful, Karen! As always. I truely enjoy reading your poems.

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

11 posted 2002-02-15 09:57 PM

This poem is as beautiful as a flower

Adrift on winds is flower’s scent
perfumes my thoughts as I invent
A spell is cast on summer noon
filling the air with magic tune

and very beautiful.

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Magicmystery
Senior Member

since 2002-02-13

Posts 821
Windsor, Ontario, Canada

12 posted 2002-02-15 10:11 PM

I Just love the way you write. It is so vivid... I am there, so beautiful and yet so sad.... one wishes that sleep would last an eternity... when the dream world surpasses the real.... I hope you find your true love soon... Well written.

Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow.
But above all... be kind to yourself today.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

13 posted 2002-02-15 10:24 PM

This takes me back to the days of my youth when the beach was my backyard, bike riding along the strand! Most of all I remember the wind blowing through my hair.

I really liked this Startime, you captured
the innocence of those long forgotten days.

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