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Would That I Could
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Would That I Could |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Ok..probably my last post for a while as I am again called to do more than time allows, and the option of not doing so... is not an option  I have enjoyed my visit back, and will return as I can to read and comment... Love you all...and maybe I will be wrong..and will have more time than I think... but don't be concerned if I am not around for a bit.Would That I Could I would touch you And wipe away the fears you hide Scrubbing clean the heart of all dust From tramping passers through So that you might smile on life And perhaps on me As I know you once did With a love’s first I would ask you For time to make it true For trust to comfort But not expect an answer in words Giving you a lifetime to explain I would touch you… That I too could feel the depths Knowing well I could drown in the sea of your eyes carried away on undertow as I sank. I would ask you If I could |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Hasta luego, amigo mio  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (BIG HUGGGSSSSS) We'll all miss you so much but we all understand that you're busy and we will all be here when you're finished! (smiles) This is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I believe that love is impossible to explain and specify and love is meant to be answered for eternal life dearly! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
we'll be here Sir. . . well done. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
i understood this one completely..sometimes i dont respond because i dont understand your poems..might know as soon as i do you leave ha..oh well..see you when you get back...  enjoyed your words...~Victoria~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Cpat You write such heart that I feel you. A poet's right to write thus, and to read within the tear. Take care of you. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
would that I could follow you if only in your mind... hugssssss and behave yourself now M |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Would that I could... I'd tie your anchor down. Would that I could ... I'd run your ship aground. Would that I could ... I'd make your other job go away. Would that YOU could ... for a poet should be able to stay and play. YOU CANT LEAVE...YA JUST CAME BACK!! *SIGH* aint that just like a sailor (  )always pulling up anchor. ok ok...do what you must...we will be saving your stool...you know which port to dry dock in. LOL take care Capt sir. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
say it ain't so...you just GOT HERE... Do NOT make me petition the deities!  Okay...sigh, sometimes that actually works. and hey, you can ask ME anything! like if ya wanna know how I liked this poem? yer gonna haveta ASK!!! e me. <---it's okay, no one else noticed that. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
If you have to go then let me say goodbye don't stay around too long for you might see me cry ...I'll wait a day for you another poem or two... if you just have to go... [somehow that sounds like an off-key song, don't you think? LOL...take Care, Cap'n...and hurry back to sanity, okay?] |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
You've touched many here in spirit C. That doesn't go away. Only makes us miss you. This view of your heart is precious. Sincerely, Regina |
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