Open Poetry #19 |
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Too Lonely |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I have been too lonely lately Since we broke up, The day since you left, I have been too lonely, lonely without you, You left me alone of a broken heart The words were unspoken Don't know you, My tears are falling down And my heart kept calling your name Iam here All alone Need you tonight Thinking of the memories, The rain kept falling harder each day and night Since I have been too lonely Lonely without saying the words That were too late to say All the day, I keep looking outside That brought me mmories of you and I That were meant to be Maybe this was suppose to be the way for us, Now Inside my heart, Wanting you so Dying to say these words to you, Wished I could tell you How much It means to you And now I have waited too long to understand why Now Iam alone And lonely without you Wanting you so Been lonely Too lonely |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Vandana, You got the point across. Enjoyed the read. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggsssssss) This is so very sad, sweet friend, I known these feelings of loneliness all too much for I have been lonely almost forever and now I know my dream girl but am lonely to meet her! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Hoping for good things to come your way vandana...we were not meant to be alone...James |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and now. . . a look at the other side of it eh my friend?? well done. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very well done Vandana...Can feel the loneli- ness of this poem... |
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