Open Poetry #19 |
Get Up Now |
Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Get Up Now Get up now and go outside Do you see whats in the sky Is that the most beautiful moon Now come on lets act like loons I mean it start yelling or howling What ever you prefer Pound on your chest Who cares if the neighbors are disturbed Grab your lover Give them the kiss of their life Don't forget that lower lip to bite By Gosh we woke up today who knows about the marrow And this moon says it all here today gone tomarrow Connie McDonald Copyright@2002 |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Connie - If I start howling at the moon right now, will you bail me out of jail when I am arrested for disturbing the peace? I enjoyed this loony and moony write. Dave |
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Lia Fail Member
since 2002-02-26
Posts 80 |
zinsser, this was a great piece. It gave me a chuckle, I like its playful theeme. Lia |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...if only my Joanna was here with me, I would be howling all night with my love in loves first kiss with her! (kiss on cheek) This is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Connie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
But Connie do loons bite each others lip..I mean bill..maybe they do??anyway nice loony moony write |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Thanks : ) To ALLLLLLLL Of You I LOVE the moon... and about biting.... well.... : ) |
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