Open Poetry #19 |
Lunar Kisses |
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(This is dedicated to Lady Luna, on this lovely moonlit night) Lunar Kisses By: Noah Eaton 12/8/00 Soft, silky Lady Luna Sheds her lucid cotton upon the blanket of the world She presents a joyful smile, one of crescent, that showers the mountains With lunar kisses, seething in the autumn breeze A breath of gleaming love that fills the entire night with romance Glittering floodlights lacrimate from moons eyes, which light upon a river below Sighs of the spirit of the river sound in the silence of the night, the mountains shadow the light upon the water The animals of the night are spellbound As Mother Nature collects the light from moon and gently breaths it’s creamy light from sea to shining sea And she throws loves lotus atilatl high into the sky, ascending above the mountains and back again like a burning boomerang As everyone falls asleep down below, and the sweet smell of the flower fills the air Filling everyone with sweet dreams of love and fanatsy Emerald light from the enchanted eyes of Mother Nature bleeds into the water and gives life to everything of sound and spirit Frost and slush beside the riverbed sparkles with millions of small diamonds of the rough, shimmering rainbow rays paint the mountains with a face Shadows of these lovely dreams fill the evening sky with beauty, as love and desires flow gently with the soft autumn breeze Healing brittle branches and hollow hearts everywhere, as lunar kisses spreads happiness and amends As the break of dawn begins to blink across the mountains, Mother Nature collects leftover magic of these dreams As she blows a kiss to the moon, and she makes herself at home in the sensual eyes of the lotus flower beside a stream in spring And the cotton moon slowly fades behind the canvas of day, and the sun shines a signal of a brand new day As the moon watches everyone wake replenished and cheerful as she blows invisible lunar kisses through the colorful flame of day [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-27-2002 10:38 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Noah! Seems the moon has worked it's magic on a lot of poets tonight! This one is wonderful. Enjoyed so much tonight! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Love this picture Noah! Often times you leave me spellbound by your words. Wonderful writing~ |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Noah - It seems this full moon tonight is inspiring many writers here tonight, and I am glad, because this was very good. Dave |
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Lia Fail Member
since 2002-02-26
Posts 80 |
You are very talented i'm really enjoying reading your work. Lia |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
what an enchanting descriptive piece, much enjoyed, Noah |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - you write so descriptively that I feel as if I'm there.. Lovely write... BC |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
I have seen a womans face glow with the moonlight and her eyes reflect it's enchanted touch. paladin |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Awwwwwwww, you are so so sweet, I hope I can dance with you under the stars this summer! Love you! Love, Your gwenevere |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Nicely done, Noah - I particularly like your finale... |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
These are some beautiful lines Noah. "Healing brittle branches and hollow hearts everywhere, as lunar kisses spreads happiness and amends" Lady moon, I love this indeed, great expression. floria Floria |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Noah, you know I love this, especially these lines. "Mother Nature collects leftover magic of these dreams As she blows a kiss to the moon" Sandra |
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