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Love Me the Way You Use To
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Love Me the Way You Use To |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Love me the way you use to when we first made love when passions flared like rocketing cosmos above run your fingers through my hair while you make love to me treat me like you use to when i was all you could see i loved the way you stared at me when you thought i did not notice as if i was bare but in the mirror i caught you as i was brushing my hair even when you read the paper while i sat on the couch of blue sage again i would see you peek around the edge of the sports page i know you still love me in your own way even though you sleep in the recliner after working all day and i cherish this gold dipped rose a sweet valentine touch a gold band around my finger shows you still love me more than just very much Love me like you use to like the moonlight upon the sea love me like you use to when River Road was our eternity "Silence is a friend who will never betray." — Confucius [This message has been edited by Victoria (02-15-2002 12:09 PM).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I think we forget the love and romance take effort to keep it shining and alive...If only we were willing to put in that effort more than one day a year...**big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) You are sooooooooo romantic, sweet friend, may he forever love you the way you dream to be loved and foreve dance with you in the moonlight with joy! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The passing of time changes a lot of things. Reminds me of a song, ~not for an hour but for always love me truly from the start, with every beat of your heart!~ (I'm dating myself now) This was very pretty Victoria~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Victoria - beautifully written, almost haunting. BC |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you dear karen...nice to hear from you hugss noah.. thank you Ms. serenade..ohhh yesss, it does..no blind dates though i hope ha bill..thank you so much ..glad you enjoyed nice to hear from you |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Haunting indeed, brought back some memories for me... We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Eddie..thank you very much..would be sad not to have any memories..good or bad i guess ~Victoria~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hm, I was thinking this recently. How someone that you were so close to, who apparently loved you so much, can be so profoundly unconcerned and even unknowing about the problems and lack of romance. Wonder how that is. Nice write, Vic. Sandra |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Full of love. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Victoria, I know exactly what you mean here, and know the feeling all too well...good honest write! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you Sandra..im sure they do...just the difference between new love and unconditional love hugss walker...thank you for peeking in nancy...thank you..glad you can relate to my words...hugs |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Victoria this is so lovely, and yes, after a hard day they do like that old recliner don't they, LOL,, this is so warm and loving, I hope you gave him this poem. And oh, that rose sounds wonderful. floria Floria |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
yes..actually he game me a gold dipped rose and another one with gold trimmed petals and leaves...i have them in bud vases..thank you floria...nice to hear from you today..hugs ~Vic |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
A bump is a bump unless it's a pleasure *BUMP*  [This message has been edited by Larry C (04-07-2002 12:13 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Reminds me of the words from a song..."don't let it die." James |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
i loved the way you stared at me when you thought i did not notice as if i was bare but in the mirror i caught you as i was brushing my hair Its so wonderful to be starting over again...David and I still have all the romance because our marriage and our lov are stillbrand new.....but your poem reminded me a lot of my first marriage, which lasted 34 yrs. I knew he loved me, but oftentimes, it seemed like he was taking me for granted...and I probably did the same for him. Thanks for sharing this, Victoria  ~many many hugs~copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sad, very touching |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Victoria where are you and your sweet, sweet poems....James |
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