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Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-02-27 08:34 PM

Under the moon of night in swoon to stay
to grasp and kiss and take the heart away.
To hold as one, become of moon so bright
A kiss of love, a kiss of life this night.

Between the stars, becomes the bright of sky
Between the hearts, before two birds then fly
Before the touch of softest flesh, the sigh
Into the glance, the knowing look of eye.

Resides in orb, the man of moon that calls
Under the gleam, the sparkling of the falls
Beyond the dream, into the glow of night
Born of the mome’, within the rays that light.

A pull that spurs our love and passion on
The force that drives within you not alone.
A month of wait till fires again do burn
A night of light that fuels two hearts in churn.

The moon in rise does take the breath from me
As heart does lift from force of gravity.
And when the howl of wolf does call our name
In lust we’ll roam in search of full moon’s game.

[This message has been edited by Magnus (02-27-2002 08:45 PM).]

Morcastlin
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since 2002-01-14

Posts 244
The Jersey Shore, USA

1 posted 2002-02-27 08:40 PM

Magnus, this is lovely! A splendid night to be had! Well done!

Love,
Bonnie

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2002-02-27 08:42 PM

Aye, the moon does that, and yet one more night of glorious light, to find love in the shadows of the snowy glen....

well done, Sir...

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

3 posted 2002-02-27 09:15 PM

The moon in rise does take the breath from me
As heart does lift from force of gravity.
And when the howl of wolf does call our name
In lust we’ll roam in search of full moon’s game

i think the moon does rule our romantic feelings...and so many other feelings in us..enjoyed barry

~Vic

"Mistakes are the portals of discovery."
-- James Joyce

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

4 posted 2002-02-27 09:21 PM

Oh I like this Magnus, It's funny, I am right now writing of the moon, so I really got into this, live this,
"Beyond the dream, into the glow of night
Born of the mome’, within the rays that light" Great lines.floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2002-02-27 09:23 PM

"Before the touch of softest flesh, the sigh
Into the glance, the knowing look of eye."

I love this part

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2002-02-27 09:23 PM

Magnus~
Magnetically I am pulled to any poem with 'moon' in the title~
This is L O V E R L Y ~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2002-02-27 09:51 PM

Barry! Love it indeed! We are all in a moon mood tonight it would seem. Or we have all been inspired by the full one tonight. Well done.
Hugs, Nancy.

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Magicmystery
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since 2002-02-13

Posts 821
Windsor, Ontario, Canada

8 posted 2002-02-27 09:55 PM

Looks like we're all turning into a bunch of moonies LOL I loved this one.

Sherry

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2002-02-27 10:28 PM

(smiles) Ooohhhhh...I love this, sweet friend, your beautiful words always light our hearts with the visions of pure love! (big huggsssssss) May you forever howl to the moon with your love and share as lifetime of happiness together, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

10 posted 2002-02-27 10:34 PM

Oh Barry!

This was visually stunning. You painted such an exquisite picture from your words and I felt my self being swept away. This is one of your best.

Take care.......Sue

Suetang

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

11 posted 2002-02-27 11:14 PM

Resides in orb, the man of moon that calls
Under the gleam, the sparkling of the falls
Beyond the dream, into the glow of night
Born of the mome', within the rays that light.
================================

Barry this is a lovely luna inspire...
and I see your rhyming muse returned with the full moon!!
this place is full of poets mooning

wonderful imagery and romantic intend.
well done poet sir

"Never made it as a wise man
couldn't cut it as a poor man stealin
Tired of livin like a blind man
sick of sight without a sense of feelin"

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

12 posted 2002-02-28 02:06 AM

Barry - excellent write. Flows really smooth. Like what you have written.. It's amazing that I also have been writing one about the moon...

BC

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