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the glass |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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and yet, the glass crystal clear sits on the table containing the liquid pondered by eyes used to seeing something on the other side seeing now only the liquid half this half that but yet, still contained and yet, the glass framed overlooks the park offering the view pondered by eyes that should have looked back as they walked by seeing now only the brick red here white here but yet, still framed and yet, the glass stained glistens in the moonlight telling the story pondered by eyes that fill now with the liquid contents seeing now only the glass multi- here -colored there but yet, still the glass -------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggsssssss) Oh my gosh, you just gace this axiom of "Is the glass half-empty or half-full?" a whole new way of looking at it, sweet friend, this is excellent! (smiles) I think another big part of nunderstanding it is to see if color reflects off the glass, if you see the robin-egg blue sky or grayness, if it is rocking or if the water is still! (smiles) This is outstanding, sweet friend, we all love you so much, BRAVO!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sven, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
AD darling boy this is without doubt one of your utter best, the flow of this couldn’t be bettered. This is such a visual poem such as you excel at writing no one does these so well As I’ve mentioned before darling boy you are a poet. This is sooooooo true and real, it touches deep into me today. What can I say except this is utterly wonderful. Who could find a flaw with this its utterly perfect    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Magnificent Oh GR8 Voice of the Northlands Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
liked this half ................ loved the other half together I enjoyed seeing through your whole glass of thoughts *s M |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* how very sad...such a sense of loneliness fills this glass and the eyes that see and feel but do not have....**big big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Okay..maybe I'm just in a stupid mood tonight, but I don't think I'm getting this. While I don't doubt that its brilliant, and I don't doubt for a moment that you still are THE Sven Pen...I just don't understand this!  ingdeeply For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Glass!? Such an interesting thing to write about... And as always your thought-provoking words give me such pleasure to read.. Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
wonderful thoughts, creative mind you have Dear Poet Sven. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very interesting. Thought provoking. Sandra |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Sven I agree with everyone else - very descriptive writing about a glass and your thoughts. Enjoyed! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Noah, indeed the glass is all around us. . .thank you my friend. . . Marsha, thank you love. . . so nice to see you around these days. . . Interloper, I will take that to mean that you enjoyed Sir. . . thank you. . . nakd, there are always two sides, two halves aren't there?? thank you. . . Startime, some loneliness in the character's eyes, yes. . . but, not as much as you would think. . . thank you. . . Temptress, read it again. . . and think about what it means to you. . . that's all there is to it. . . thank you. . . Enchanted Melody, good to see you again my friend. . . yes, the world is full of interesting things to write about. . . thank you. . . Charisma, thank you my friend. . . it's had a lot of time to think these days. . . vandana, thank you, as always. . . Sandra, it made me think too. . . thank you. . . Ariana, thank you. . . I thought about not just a glass. . . but glass in general. . . thank you for reading. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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