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A Cherish of Sky
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A Cherish of Sky |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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A Cherish of Sky In the captured circle of the moon the sky has opened another and another more moons across the bloom of midnight until the night glows like quiet candles and shadowed lace branch the lawn See how the trees talk with heavy breath they sigh into each other touching on a sound like wings falling falling into the pale float of air like light rain I love your face leaning into the light eyes of you open me and the silken slither of my youth remembers how magic is bare skin and a cherish of sky [This message has been edited by Martie (02-27-2002 07:50 PM).] |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh Martie! ~* Imagination is more important than knowledge *~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, A sweet lovely. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well now I see that we need to go from Hankie Alerts to Watch out for the Goosebumps warnings.... and yes, Martie, in answer to that question: we have surely crossed paths.... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
A beauty Martie.... one I am glad you shared with us... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ 'I love your face now leaning into the light eyes of you open me and the silken slither of my youth remembers how magic is bare skin and a cherish of sky' THAT'S why I call it Martiesque~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I want to be there. *S* But I'd settle for being able to write like this... even once. *S* Beautiful! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
In the captured circle of the moon the sky has opened another and another more moons across the bloom of midnight until the night glows like quiet candles and shadowed lace branch the lawn See how the trees talk now with heavy breath they sigh into each other touching on a sound like wings falling falling into the pale float of air like light rain =================================== Time and time again you do this....time after time you give me poetic chills and envy, and every time I read these, I start talking out loud to myself in awe and delight... one would think after awhile I wouldnt be so "surprised" that you do...must be that each time you surpass the time before... yeah.....that must be it.  this is AWESOME....I saw that moon lastnight and I thought of you...I hoped you were seeing it too. I took pictures... you wrote one with your words.  me |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I love this line and where you've taken it. . . indeed to the very sky that you speak of. . . wonderful in form and in content. . .  -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"I love your face now leaning into the light eyes of you open me and the silken slither of my youth remembers how magic is bare skin and a cherish of sky"   (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooooo breathtaking, sweet friend, I can't help but always sigh when I stare at the moon, imagining seeing my loves face against it dancing with her and hearing nature sing! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is inspiringly gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
This sounds very lovely, Martie. I wish I'd been there. *hugs*Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* oh yes...I too remember those feeling beneath the sky....*sigh* and wish for them again...BRAVO!!!This poem is wonderful...**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Absolutely beautiful, Martie! You've done it again! |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
I always knew that trees talked Martie but I thought they only talked to me. I am so glad you hear them too. Lovely write. floria Floria |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I love your face now leaning into the light eyes of you open me and the silken slither of my youth remembers how magic is bare skin and a cherish of sky ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Oh Martie! Sorry that's about all I can manage just now....awesome! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
We don't need canvas and paint with you around, Martie...  |
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