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Gene
Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935
Colorado, USA

0 posted 2001-02-02 02:34 PM


...from a longer poem (repost), but since you two are making me hungry...
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If I were a poet,
I’d cook up a recipe for everyone to delight in.
You’d savor each word, rolling it around on your tongue,
As you craved each and every piece of my verse.

Maybe, I’d start you off
With some onomatopoeia soup.
I’d mix the words and blend them well,
Until the flavor was sublime,
Then spice it up with a pentameter beet,
And even throw in a little rhyme.
I’d add some metaphor and simile
Until the dish was sweet,
Then, serve it up on a plate
Of limerick, all complete.  

I’m more than happy to share my recipe.
I’m very glad to show it,
But I wish I were a better a cook.
If only I were a Poet.





Gene
(formerly, u_gene)

© Copyright 2001 Gene M. - All Rights Reserved
doreen peri
Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812
Virginia
1 posted 2001-02-02 10:26 PM


i LOVE it, gene!!!  
thanks for this!.....

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
2 posted 2001-02-03 07:52 AM


Gene,
sounds good enough to eat.
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



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