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KristieSue
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0 posted 2003-05-27 12:34 PM



Remember when...

You held my hand to
save me from a fall

You tickled me to
chase my tears away

You held me tight to
make me feel secure

You screamed my name to
save my life from harm

I turned from you to
find my voice of freedom

I left your home to
find a path of my own

I came back to you to
beg on hands and knees

You embraced me tight to
welcome me back home

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

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1 posted 2003-05-27 01:01 PM


This is nice, Kristie. It reminds me of the Prodigal Son parable. Do you want this moved to Poetic Haven?

God bless America, my home sweet home.

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