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Alicat
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since 1999-05-23
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Coastal Texas

0 posted 2006-06-13 11:01 AM


Who e'r knew the world could be so beautiful?
I've travelled so far o'er highway hue.
And every mile marker that passes by
Serves only to bring me closer to you.

Time has not been kind to us lately
Though every day brings something new.
Every hour that passes slowly by
Serves only to bring me closer to you.

Every highway comes to an ending
With another road always in view;
Every path always leads homeward
And that's where I know I'll find you.

Ali
4/19/06


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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2006-06-13 11:26 AM


K--now, if the last verse is chorus, yer gonna have to mix that up a bit, (add a couple lines maybe) but nonetheless, this could bridge quite easily, and can you tell that I have missed you?



((((((((((((squeeze))))))))))))

Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
2 posted 2006-06-13 12:38 PM


Hi hi hi!!

It's good to see you, as well as someone posting in this forum!!  I love this poetic form (can't remember what it's called).  Such a heart sensitive piece.  Much enjoyed!

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