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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2005-08-06 08:37 PM



I am a Scorpio.
It's been said
I have a powerful sting,
can cut right through
to the bone.

Well, my bets tonight are on
the Super Scorpio sub,
that she will rescue
those trapped Russian subbers.

It's a new version
of Russian roulette
where everyone
must come up a winner.


*

© Copyright 2005 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-08-06 09:36 PM


I have sworn that Scorpions
shall never more abide in me
for even though they loved me more
the afterglow did sting.

My mother is an Eagle and
my husband is a bull.
My brother called the four corners
of prophecy, Ezekial.

My lovers were tenacity
and bonded me with tail.
But I am double Gemini--
I know that freedom must prevail.

Scorpions
they are intense
that sting
that's so notorious
is simply lack
of all pretense,
but naked, I
need some defense

and though they are encompessing
of the corners four I sing
I need a love of evermore
thus, I adore the Capricorn

stealth upon the slopes is goat
the greatest love of all, is hope.
Selfless and reliant, he
has every bit of trust from me

and love (that I could not conceive)
has taken root from tiny seed
Though I do love the scorpio--
This weary Gem prefers a goat

a gentle guide for mountain high--
this Gemini needs stubborn love.



*  *  *

Loved the poem, Kacy, and yanno? Scorpions are fantastic, exciting lovers too. But...



I guess it's written in the stars for me.

I need a goat. Prolly cause I'm so baaaaaaaaaaaad.

hugs you



serenity blaze
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2 posted 2005-08-06 09:37 PM


and oh yes...my bet's on the tenacious scorpio sub too. Candles lit and prayers unceasing.

(I got carried away with your astrology metaphor)

sheesh

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3 posted 2005-08-06 10:15 PM


lol, I loved that reply
only you could lay such a write down and make me giggle with glee

thanks for the replies, and the email
and we shall all be hoping the Scorpio cuts through the deep and saves those men

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4 posted 2005-08-07 12:39 PM


YES! YES! YES!
The Scorpio came through, the crew is safe!
~sigh~ and somewhere in Russia, a loved one cries with relief.

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5 posted 2005-08-07 12:55 PM




You are the world's cheerleader, m'friend.

Anybody ever tell you that you give great critical mass?


Midnitesun
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6 posted 2005-08-07 01:04 AM


lol, no
thanks, for readin me


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7 posted 2005-08-07 01:51 AM


um...I'd hoped you'd write me back.

(I'm notorious for losing e mail addy's.)

There is a subject for a poem I find intriguing and  I'd like very much to with you work on it.

Drop me a line, will ya?

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