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Allysa
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In an upside-down garden

0 posted 2004-06-10 04:31 PM


She sees you with her eyes closed
you walk carefully,
don't step on her toes
stroke her hair to find the answers
burried deep within her skin
kiss her lips with intent
to make her understand.

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1 posted 2004-06-10 05:34 PM


Wonderful writing Allysa, I throughily enjoyed the read. Keep on writing

Andrew

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