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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981
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There is nothing wrong with fading. wishing that I could vanish here. let me deny my existence, let the light shine through my skin. I am disintegrating, allowing air to rush through, escaping by the cracks in my head. nothing but static few cries are audible, only the stinging screams of millions of falling rocks. tell me the difference between flying and falling, and I will tell you what is real a ghost just passed through me, or was it human? I pass through myself. I want to vanish- following millions of fading lights, with no one to ask me why. [This message has been edited by Wind (10-21-2003 06:23 PM).] |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
*falls to pieces* <--best egg-wash it Wow.....................................um................hmmm.....er.......ah.....huuuuuuuh!.....m Yeah.... good *stuff*. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I put the peices back together but sometimes they come out all deranged. deranged... deranged... What about China? Have you seen the Great Wall? |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Now I have a David Bowie song stuck in my head. Which, coincidentally enough, Reznor produced. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
shrugs.. which one? What about China? Have you seen the Great Wall? |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
let me deny my existence, let the light shine through my skin. I am disintegrating, allowing air to rush through, escaping by the cracks in my head. ================================== the only thing I see rushing out of you is very cool poetry.  another uniquely Liz write.  You're the color of the sky reflected in each store-front window pane ... |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
thanks moth lady you are one of a kind  What about China? Have you seen the Great Wall? |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
(seven hundred hours too late) The song's "I'm Deranged." |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
yes? I am? What about China? Have you seen the Great Wall? |
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mytuesdaywishes Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 254a voice from the musicbox |
feel like that sometimes...vanishing can happen, but be careful what you wish for...it's no fun being a ghost i think that it's brainless to assume that making changes to your window's view will gain a new perspective. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"tell me the difference between flying and falling, and I will tell you what is real" One can kill you, the other only feels like it will. Applause again kiddo! |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
yeah we've all felt it at one time or another. and Dunc I know. sometimes you get both at the same time. dunno...they are basicaly the same thing because gravity says... who cares what gravity says.  I heard this song once called karma and it said that what comes up must come down. or maybe I made it up. but my memory is pretty insane. as is my present self. some situations with a lot of people I don't know freak me out. thats why sometimes I want to go *poof* but then again it is kinda funny when I look back What about China? Have you seen the Great Wall? |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I wanna go *poof* sometimes myself. Fortunately, those days don't last forever. Email me, I promise I'll answer. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Liz? tell me the difference between flying and falling, wings wings wings and splat! *smile* xxoo |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
First of all, love the crique message. nothing but static few cries are audible, only the stinging screams of millions of falling rocks. tell me the difference between flying and falling, and I will tell you what is real I adore this. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
thanks yes..tis true I only bite when provoked. What about China? Have you seen the Great Wall? |
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Deep_Inside Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377i can't stop hiding |
"following millions of fading lights, with no one to ask me why." following millions of fading lights, or following the fading of yourself "a ghost just passed through me, or was it human? I pass through myself." or passing thought in wanting to connect with yourself why? |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
you mean you have never been in a situation where you were so terrified or upset that you just wanted to vanish? why isn't really the question.... What about China? Have you seen the Great Wall? |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada |
i think everyone has been there....... intresting write |
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