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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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She had been thinking that morning, she said of how well I had coped Those words have since broken the silence Moisture upon cracked lines of suffered skin Your reign rejuvinated Watching fingers bend the way flesh rolls over joints and back again I never forgot your shape the comfortable way it became less that you plagued me How long before next silence dominates where it should again? Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I know that type of silence... Thank you, Gemma |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
i don't know what to say, gem. this is great, you caught my brain in a butterfly net. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
its like liquid gem. this flows... And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
excellent. a portrait of depth and layered meaning... I love this. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
amazing hurt gem..on a brighter note..guess who was just in town..kelly |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
thanks guys. sorry i'm back to moaning n being mardy again. bad week. bad summer. i'm seeing him on the 20th of december. in warbling annoyiong mariah carey voice, "aaalllll i want for christmassssssssss is kellllyyyyyy" I hereby pronounce myself the BIGGEST GEEK EVER. and i'm nearly 21. i need to get a life.  Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
"Watching fingers bend the way flesh rolls over joints and back again" ... it's those little things. Really special Gem I haven't read any of your poems before - I don't come here often enough obviously!! Because look what I've been missing out on.. Bless your cotten sockies, you poetic maniacs. ^_^ |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Gem you're definitely the biggest geek ever and i've been told you suck at checkers..lol |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Holding this one in my mind...very well written, holding much meaning for me. Patricia |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Gem, I felt like coming back and telling you that there hasn't been a day that this has been up where I haven't come and read it and reread it... It's magnetizing. |
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