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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2003-09-18 08:06 PM



Fingers, Pointing

If it had been once, or twice
in several weeks, or even days
I would say…

Coincidence…

“Dreams about linking with
that long-lost person pervade.
All time seems to be happening
at once, and the way you view
the past, colors everything
going on. By changing your
point of view,
you can change the past…”

so said the horoscope.

Realistically speaking, I’m told,
1/12th of the world’s population
gets my horoscope.

Their horoscope.

But for 21 days in a row
mine has been
pointing its psychic finger
at me,

coinciding, as it were,
with friends, who point to
the air, saying,
in so many words, “fly!”

“carry your dreams”

and

“why are you being
so stubborn…”

I’ve avoided the horoscope section
some four days now…
until today.

Are there factions
out there…that just know?

Yes, they know.
I would point back at the horoscope,
demanding to know its source,
requiring of it, tell me how!

but three fingers of the hand would only
point back to me,

so, even if I were to supplicate
of the mist….

and the doors…

…but the past calls, I have
procrastinated enough…

the novel
cannot be written
by anyone
else.

Nothing I give thought to,
will be written
by anyone
else…

fingers, pointing.

© Copyright 2003 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Ceinwyn
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1 posted 2003-09-18 08:25 PM


oh gawd! this is creepy but in a good way..or wait eerie... I read this as if its addressed to me...yeah I know I'm weird

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

serenity blaze
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2 posted 2003-09-18 08:50 PM


Gawd I love you...

"…but the past calls, I have
procrastinated enough…

the novel
cannot be written
by anyone
else.

Nothing I give thought to,
will be written
by anyone
else…

fingers, pointing."

Thank you...



littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
3 posted 2003-09-18 09:01 PM


Yes Karilea . . .
I saw the same beauty here

so, even if I were to supplicate
of the mist….

and the doors…

…but the past calls, I have
procrastinated enough…

the novel
cannot be written
by anyone
else.

No, it surely cannot
and eerie indeed . . .
the past calls . . .
beautiful writing
xxoo

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2003-09-19 09:04 AM


"and the doors…

…but the past calls, I have
procrastinated enough…

the novel
cannot be written
by anyone
else.

Nothing I give thought to,
will be written
by anyone
else…"

I know...yes, I know.
Thinking...determined...thinking...are we?

Love ya lady!
This is excellent...
And, I didn't need to look at your chart to know that.

~Hugs, YOU!~

Martie
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5 posted 2003-09-19 11:06 AM


Karilea

You'll be fine, as long as you listen to your heart!  

Midnitesun
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Gaia
6 posted 2003-09-19 11:31 AM


YES!!!!!
You know, I really, really understand this one, even though I only read horoscopes for fun, I do understand how you can interpret them on this level.
WRITE, WRITE, WRITE IT!!!! It's true, only YOU can do it with your words and POV.
Get busy, lady.

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