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bsquirrel
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0 posted 2003-09-10 03:36 PM


Smoking deep and lazily,
I notice that she dances, floats
the same as the first snow of winter.

One bright crystal spinning down
through the dark, a moth in lights,
down to touch the waiting street.

Oh, the fog rises from fields,
the trees are cut-outs, gray signposts
lifting toward the remnant sun.

Their covered limbs in arrayed ice,
dripping frozen in remains.
Those trees lay straight into the rays

as she passes, dancing down.
Wanton melt is what she wants,
and as she touches down, receives.

She takes the ciggy from my hand,
draws a deep and playful taste,
and through her eyes, I know she knows.

[This message has been edited by bsquirrel (09-10-2003 03:44 PM).]

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Kaoru
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1 posted 2003-09-11 03:19 AM


How do I do that little emoticon...
awh, screw it.
This is awesome..
I'm working on that code for you, brother.

vlraynes
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2 posted 2003-09-11 04:19 AM



"One bright crystal spinning down
through the dark, a moth in lights,
down to touch the waiting street.

Oh, the fog rises from fields,
the trees are cut-outs, gray signposts
lifting toward the remnant sun.

Their covered limbs in arrayed ice,
dripping frozen in remains.
Those trees lay straight into the rays"

Just beautiful, Mikey.  I always enjoy reading you.
Hugs,
~Vicky

If you judge people, you have no time to love them.
--Mother Teresa

bsquirrel
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3 posted 2003-09-11 12:25 PM


Thank you both. And much appreciated on anything you can offer code-wise, Kaoru.
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4 posted 2003-09-11 09:39 PM


I wanted to say this earlier but..I get those winter thoughts too. its beautiful. and..um. I forgive ya

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

littlewing
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5 posted 2003-09-12 02:23 AM


Mikey . . .
she seems like a snowflake to me . . .
beautiful, as always
xxoo

bsquirrel
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6 posted 2003-09-12 03:31 PM


Danke.
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