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littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

0 posted 2003-09-03 06:40 AM

Have a care woman
for I intend to make you mine
to bring us together

Be you careful
that I don't smother you
in this, my pursuit of you

Stay the course
that you've set for yourself
make me, but an addition

An adjunct
to what you already have
to fortify your life

A charm
to dangle from your heart
and warm your spirit

Have a care woman
for I intend to win you
to love you.....unending

You come
upon the cool night breeze
caressing my face
wisp of wind
your kiss
my lips . . .

Within this visit
the night prowl
your presence,
consumes my mouth
my soul, my breath
becomes your own

it always was

and I sigh
and smile
fingers firmly wrapped
holding the locket upon my neck
placed there by love
and longing

I turn
and there you are, my love
Arms to hold me
growling
winning me

all over again

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

1 posted 2003-09-03 08:48 AM

An absolutely beautiful collaboration Ed and Sue.

fantastic!

Maree

fate is not just
whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

KristieSue

Senior Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 1460
PA, US

2 posted 2003-09-03 10:14 AM

I'd love to be given such a threat :-)

Awesome job!

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

3 posted 2003-09-03 09:09 PM

you two always work so well, very nice

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2003-09-03 09:43 PM

Hmm, think I heard some delightful growling in this one.

Love this dynamic pairing.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

5 posted 2003-09-03 11:35 PM

Sigh...I'd like some of that...*smile*

This is truly beautiful...on multiple levels.

Smiling at you two...
"Deep inside this armor, the warrior is a child."
~Twila Paris

Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

6 posted 2003-09-03 11:49 PM

This is yet another phenominal write from a pair of phenominal writers...

We are all equal but we’re individually different
and able to reach the impossible if we try.

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

7 posted 2003-09-04 12:01 PM

I don't think that I've told you how very much your words have added to this...

Started as just a thought, you added...life.

Have a care...

[This message has been edited by wranx (09-04-2003 12:03 AM).]

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

8 posted 2003-09-04 08:20 AM

Hey you two...this is wonderful! Your styles, and your thoughts seemed to have meshed together and formed a masterpiece!

Luvs Ya

Tima

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

9 posted 2003-09-04 09:42 PM

a very smart person said that you cannot have rock without rythem. and you have it all

that person was me

insanity is not a crime

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

10 posted 2003-09-05 03:44 AM

Thank you Maree . . . so very much

Kristie, yes, lovely it is . . .
thank you

Thank you Raph, that meant a lot to me

Kacy, cover your ears!  *smile*
thank you

Thank you Vicky . . . smiling right back

Brad, you are so sweet . . . always have the perfect words . . . *smile*
thank you

Ed sweety, yes, a thought - your thought to heart to pen to mine . . . I thank you for this and so much more . . .
Have a Care . . . yes, I sure will

Tima . . . thank you so much
that really made me smile

Liz, and as I have always said, you are far beyond your years . . . thank you

Thanks guys . . .
What started as a sentiment, turned into
this . . . Ed?

[This message has been edited by littlewing (09-05-2003 03:45 AM).]

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

11 posted 2003-09-05 09:33 AM

A thought, a sentiment...
Words that convey something disolute, but in this new revelation they become resolute.

And Susie?

Dreamer@
Junior Member

since 2003-04-13

Posts 38
Denmark

12 posted 2003-09-06 12:44 PM

Smile

Dreamer

Life is for mee to be !

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

13 posted 2003-09-06 02:34 PM

Hmm, don't you think this one belongs on everyone's recommended reading list?

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (09-06-2003 02:36 PM).]

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

14 posted 2003-09-06 08:23 PM

EEEEEE i missed this one.A pleasure to read you both.

a keeper.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

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