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bsquirrel
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0 posted 2003-08-22 01:16 PM


The icicles will speak their peace;
preparing their soliloquies
in crystal drops of roofmelt,
the light's dance through small prisms.
The interplay of two or more
sliding past the frosted panes,
a small, simple facsimile
of the buried summer rain.

[This message has been edited by bsquirrel (08-22-2003 01:16 PM).]

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littlewing
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1 posted 2003-08-22 02:04 PM


Mikey . . . what a beautiful thought
the summer's rain in an icicle
and I sit here and ponder exactly what could scare you in that picture!

Love the new px
*smile*
xxoo

Nicole
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2 posted 2003-08-23 10:32 PM


This reminded me of a place I used to live, and loved...thank you for that.

Nicole

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
3 posted 2003-08-25 12:44 PM


new pic rocks lol
Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
4 posted 2003-08-26 12:42 PM


littlewing's comment about the summer rain made it all more clear..

As I'm tossing kittens off of my keyboard, I'll say
I'm in awe..

*toss*


Ceinwyn
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5 posted 2003-09-12 07:58 PM


where's that bump icon thingy..yeah for sure..I missed this..I'm torturing myself again...I envy your & others talent...will I ever be this good!?

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

bsquirrel
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6 posted 2003-09-13 02:08 AM


Thanks, guys. And Kris, who says you're not?
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