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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow 
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iron fist lung crossing just above my eye. so rust i can hear you breathe. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I really liked the sound of this  insanity is not a crime |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
*scared* should I be? this gave me chills. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Indeed. You just transported me back to a time of a tale...one that I did not personally live through, only knew from the sound of my mother's voice, of her time in the iron lung when she was paralyzed with infantile paralysis as a teen. She was one of the lucky ones... Very good, Meghan. |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
For a moment I thought your screen name was Karouak, like the american beat poet. This poem sounds a bit like one of his "haiku." Still, however, the meaning of this poem is rather unclear. 2+2=5 for sufficiently large values of 2 |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Meg, extremely insightful . . . Goodness . . . xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (08-22-2003 10:39 PM).] |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
amazing |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Ooo, I love this. Potent. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
me bumps this one too!!! Liz's favorites bumping day. my poem is lonely What about China? Have you seen the Great Wall? |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
and I was going to serinade you but I forgot half the words... 'this is our new song..something something..my iron lung'  |
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