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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-07-06 12:32 PM



Everchanging

The clouds shadow my silence
framing my thoughts
as I write in its blue
wondering if you might
have loved me, if only
you had taken the time
to have known me...

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2003-07-06 05:40 PM


smile.

I don't just think so.

I KNOW so.


timothysangel1973
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since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725
Never close enough
2 posted 2003-07-08 07:31 AM


wondering if you might
have loved me, if only
you had taken the time
to have known me...

I feel as though I have felt this same way before, maybe in another time and place...

Wonderful write!

Local Parasite
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since 2001-11-05
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Transylconia, Winnipeg
3 posted 2003-07-13 03:28 PM


Taking the time to know someone is as much a destroyer of love as it is a harbinger...

Be careful what you wish for, and even more careful what you regret.  It's not good to linger on the past, because unlike the future, it can't be changed--it is solid, petrified and dead.

Hah... liked your poem though, especially the title.  Very clever.

Parasite

Poets are the unacknowledged legislators of the world.
~Percy Bysshe Shelley

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