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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
The lonely street accepts the flow and veil succumbing to an unreal happiness my vacant wand'ring steps resound and haunt forgotten dead emptiness shadows cast by dead civies trampling boots crushing fist the new democracy nation without a dictatorial noose Look beside you into those eyes we tried we tried we tried look below to the soaked pavement we lied we lied we lied The screaming blood spurts forth police without power crime without intent the artery ruptures loosing its confines heart belonging to no one violence throbbing for everyone we are the experiment we are the dead state come o liberty come lord come 2+2=5 for sufficiently large values of 2 |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
deep and dark yes, we have to find a way past all this kill, kill, kill mentality not to mention lie, lie, lie I'll have to come back for another visit later, as it's time for me to get ready for work. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
the perspective is realist...and with a bit of cynical... I was told once..that you do not plant without turning the earth... |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is very dark, I felt cynicism in there too in undertones. Thanks for sharing  Luv, Liz xxx "Gorge the honey from life, and live through the stomach aches knowing they will pass..." ~Liz Pinard 2003~ |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
this is going into my library for futher reading.....great riley *the bloody tide comes in on the shore, time after time* |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I can feel this today. I can see it everywhere. Your words written with such care that even I, the optimist feel down. |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Oh my goodness, Frac... this is terrific. I love what you've written here, the concept, the style... first the style, very simple and flowing with subtle techniques that just add to the pleasure of the read. Like the we tried/we lied thing... that was really cool. Democracy is the first step towards anarchy... isn't it?  Parasite Poets are the unacknowledged legislators of the world. |
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