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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
He said, with you? it's just a game a test to love you anyway and I replied, it's not the same? Is it not so with everyone? I am not the only one... are you not here pleasing me? you want me to whisper your name... and he looked down at his notes I told him that was but scapegoat avoidance of the me in me... He signed the chart and set me free... I grinned. He signed. Reluctantly... (repost from Corner Pub) " Only those who risk going too far can possibly find out how far one can go." T.S. Eliot |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
when you flirt with your shrink, they call it "transference".... you've just inspired me... lol... huh? what's that you say? you WEREN'T flirting with him? er her? awww geez, i'm so very confused.... let me ask you this, does EVERYBODY who talks to you take notes? i know i do... lol... but that's just my little parade... i take notes about everything about everything but only those who say significant stuff get paraphrased.... did your shrink paraphrase you, btw? what does this poem MEAN? do you have a mirror i can look in so i can figure out if i'm really here.? do you have ANY idea what i'm talking about? no? ahhhh well... don't feel bad, neither do i, but i dig your poem, miss |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Need shrink! Me think To the Stute you go. Doc Moose Turn screw loose You'll never feel low White walls Padded halls Dipped in purity Stop by Say "Hi" Find Serenity And best of all, he doesn't take notes. Andrew Scott Crayon King Ruler of the Stute East Wing & Royal Rooster |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I saw a shrink once...oh, sorry that was my ex husband....sigh! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely said here!! I liked this one! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Hehe, probably if I went to see one, I would not be let off so lightly.. Well said.. enjoyed muchly. ^^ Luv, Lynne "He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Me likes.. like the dialogue format... K - did you get my email? I'm having trouble with mine at the moment... hugs fellow K |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh...so now I understand...hmmm, my X husband was, hmmm is, a shrink...and all that time I thought he loved me...and here it was only 13 years of therepy. Enjoyed your poem. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Do what I do,,,,,find a woman shrink! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Want to thank you all...and doreen...good gawd, I sure hope no one's taking notes...sigh! But this was my humorous spin on the end of what was supposed to be "couple's counseling"...grin...thanks again, all! " Only those who risk going too far can possibly find out how far one can go." T.S. Eliot |
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