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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738


0 posted 2001-02-16 02:36 PM


He said,
with you?
it's just a game
a test to
love you anyway
and I replied,
it's not the same?

Is it not so
with everyone?
I am not the only one...
are you not here
pleasing me?
you want me
to whisper your name...

and he looked down
at his notes
I told him
that was but scapegoat
avoidance
of the me in me...

He signed the chart
and set me free...

I grinned.
He signed.
Reluctantly...

(repost from Corner Pub)


" Only those who risk going too far can possibly find out how far one can go."
T.S. Eliot


© Copyright 2001 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812
Virginia
1 posted 2001-02-16 03:47 PM


when you flirt with your shrink, they call it "transference".... you've just inspired me... lol... huh? what's that you say? you WEREN'T flirting with him? er her? awww geez, i'm so very confused.... let me ask you this, does EVERYBODY who talks to you take notes? i know i do... lol... but that's just my little parade... i take notes about everything about everything but only those who say significant stuff get paraphrased....

did your shrink paraphrase you, btw? what does this poem MEAN? do you have a mirror i can look in so i can figure out if i'm really here.? do you have ANY idea what i'm talking about?

no?

ahhhh well... don't feel bad, neither do i, but i dig your poem, miss

Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA
2 posted 2001-02-16 05:28 PM


Need shrink!
Me think
To the Stute you go.

Doc Moose
Turn screw loose
You'll never feel low

White walls
Padded halls
Dipped in purity

Stop by
Say "Hi"
Find Serenity

And best of all, he doesn't take notes.

Andrew Scott
Crayon King
Ruler of the Stute East Wing
& Royal Rooster

Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
3 posted 2001-02-16 06:34 PM


I saw a shrink once...oh, sorry that was my ex husband....sigh!
Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
4 posted 2001-02-18 01:05 AM


Nicely said here!!
I liked this one!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Yu Lan
Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand
5 posted 2001-02-19 02:18 AM


Hehe, probably if I went to see one, I would not be let off so lightly.. Well said.. enjoyed muchly. ^^


Luv,
Lynne

"He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu

Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

6 posted 2001-02-19 04:31 PM


Me likes..

like the dialogue format...

K - did you get my email? I'm having trouble with mine at the moment...

hugs

fellow K

Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
7 posted 2001-02-19 10:05 PM


Oh...so now I understand...hmmm, my X husband was, hmmm is, a shrink...and all that time I thought he loved me...and here it was only 13 years of therepy. Enjoyed your poem.
Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

8 posted 2001-02-20 04:49 PM


Do what I do,,,,,find a woman shrink!

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

9 posted 2001-02-21 09:34 PM


Want to thank you all...and doreen...good gawd, I sure hope no one's taking notes...sigh! But this was my humorous spin on the end of what was supposed to be "couple's counseling"...grin...thanks again, all!

" Only those who risk going too far can possibly find out how far one can go."
T.S. Eliot


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