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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa 
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sandpaper is my favorite word but how long can you read it before tiring of the drone of unborn glass on buried bone |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
if you want to ache with me? we find a better word, luv... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
um.... howwazzat? |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
nothing "tiring" about this poem, enjoyed  I used to make phantoms I could later chase images of all that could be desired then I got tired of counting all of these blessings"h.devoto magazine |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...unborn glass on buried bone... Dang. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Arrrrgh. That hurt.  Your writing always evokes... |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Sandpaper, eh? Unborn vs Buried suggests some sort of lifecycle thing... and I'm not sure how sandpaper relates to that exactly. Maybe you mean how it slowly wears something down until it is gone? Is that the function of the word "sandpaper," as something that slowly and subtly softens to death? Hard to tell. I like the word "sandpaper" too. It's a high-quality word.  Clear that up for me though, ok-ay? Parasite It's amazing the effect ice can have on the world. |
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