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bsquirrel
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0 posted 2002-10-29 02:12 PM


You fill my ears
-- my eyes --
my mouth.

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brian sites
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usa
1 posted 2002-10-29 02:31 PM


bobbing for the
Apple
in a bucket
full of words

serenity blaze
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2 posted 2002-10-29 02:42 PM


and ah, but to conceive, therein...

ultimately giving birth

to ourselves...

love ya Mikey!

bsquirrel
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3 posted 2002-10-29 05:13 PM


As I love you guys, too. Thanks!
Local Parasite
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4 posted 2002-11-29 11:24 AM


I like the implied double-meaning of "[fill] my eyes."  Usually used to describe tears welling up, but this kind of use is different from the other two, which makes the meaning of "my eyes" seem to be that you read verse, and that is how it fills your eyes...

Very cool, Mikey.  You're the king of subtlety.

Parasite

Facts do not cease to exist because they are ignored.
~Aldous Huxley

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