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Poet deVine
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

0 posted 2002-06-21 07:54 PM

Like intersecting passages
In a sleazy summer romance
Our lives dance together
Waiting only to take this chance

The words may be redundant
Oft used within my rhyme
But the love in my heart beats
To an everlasting time

Turn the page and you will find
My heart written in line forty three
So hurry, my love, open the book
And read me, read me!

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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855

1 posted 2002-06-21 07:56 PM

Consider yrself read.

She said burn ... together.

Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
2 posted 2002-06-21 08:13 PM

Made me smile..if only we could be read AND understood *s

great one!!

Mistletoe Angel
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Member Empyrean
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
3 posted 2002-06-22 12:04 PM

BRAVO!!! Oh Sharon, your inspiration is endless, it seems that we always expect our lovers to be able to understand us completely, then when our expectations are not fulfilled we just wish we could help them understand and be their professor and have them be preached like we are professors in Love 101! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, you speak of this yearning so well, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."


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