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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
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no one ever loved me quite the way you claim to do no one ever loved me left me gasping in these shades of blue. yes, it IS intensity-- and yes the need matches despair.. no one ever loved me much-- no one ever stole my air. No one ever came to me in want of my exhales. No one loved me quite enough-- no one, matched, the way I care... I don't need much-- just meet of me-- and that's too much reality... I need to touch the mirror'd me... I need a Hercules-- hold me? I need you be a part of ME. I need you-- need you set me free. I love you-- (if you did exist...) I wish I could release this wish. I wish I wish that emptiness were not the tide's relentlessness... caving castles built on shore in whispers of the evermore... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
no one ever loved me quite the way you claim to do no one ever loved me left me gasping in these shades of blue. yes, it IS intensity-- and yes the need matches despair.. no one ever loved me much-- no one ever stole my air. No one ever came to me in want of my exhales. No one loved me quite enough-- no one, matched, the way I care... ============================= I need you be a part of ME. I need you-- need you set me free. I love you-- (if you did exist...) I wish I could release this wish. I wish I wish that emptiness were not the tide's relentlessness... caving castles built on shore in whispers of the evermore... =========================== OMG!!!!!! moth in flames...... oh my oh my oh my......... no one ever loved me left me gasping in these shades of blue. yes, it IS intensity-- and yes the need matches despair.. no one ever loved me much-- no one ever stole my air. No one ever came to me in want of my exhales. ================================= OH MY indeed..................... gaaaawwwd...I love the way you write... and you do know you just wrote me in the moth mirror.... oh yes...you KNOW.............. the fact you wrote this on your birthday is poetic justice baby. very very very cool write KA.   mothy me *wearing worship knee pads*  *going to get windex to clean the mirrors* |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wonderful writing, Karen...a heart sigh in words, but more! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
You are doing a lot of soul searching lately...this is excellent!  |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Karen, this is amazing. I wish I could find this person, also. Sandra |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
 Thank you. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ 'caving castles built on shore in whispers of the evermore...' In whispers sigh across a sea your thoughts come crashing back at me Waves upon the new of sand carving castles Oh so grand~ Well ... suffice to say ... I felt the brush of inspire~ Lovely thoughts .... thank you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I don't need much-- just meet of me-- and that's too much reality... I need to touch the mirror'd me... sounds like my Alicethruglass.... You are writing and expressing very well of late. *s M |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and again... look at the date on this one.. your birthday..OUR GIFT |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
this spell was written 2 months and 5 days before it's desire came to pass happy birthday love |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
oh my, you just ripped tears out of my eyes... *sigh* ...here's to wishes written in ashes and blown to the wind Hope your birthday was fantastic, and this poem really is a gift as Janet Marie said |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ahhhhhh sniff, sniff, and with that I am going to bed to dream about dreams coming true! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah...serene.... smiling... wouldn't have anything to do with slow dancing would it?  ...now... when the house/cave/castle is complete? Will you duet with me? [Probably won't happen until after I get back from my trip... but put it on your schee-du-al, puhleeze?] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
thanks  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
OMG WOW!  The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
no one ever loved me much-- no one ever stole my air. No one ever came to me in want of my exhales. No one loved me quite enough-- no one, matched, the way I care... ~*~ Yes...I do know... |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
 Just me digging again |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
no one ever loved me left me gasping in these shades of blue. yes, it IS intensity-- and yes the need matches despair.. no one ever loved me much-- no one ever stole my air. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ *sigh* ... feeling this one tonite lovie. yktikykik one drop, an ocean ... one seed, the forest ... one leaf, the wind ... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you JM for pulling this up. It goes in my library and my heart. This is me. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Mine too! Smiling at this ever so soft side of you. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
I have come back to read this more than three times....It is so deep and sincere. I know many of us understand your need. But in real life those who are able and would fulfill such a need are often tossed aside as being whimpy or think they might be...We can go on dreaming I guess.. I think I had such a love, but he was unable to express it openly, or could not find the ways or words... I often told myself the words I knew he would say if he but could..Does that make sense? best, martyjo |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
He is there. Know that, never doubt. Be open, be ready, and have no preconceptions whatsoever...love is almost always a shock, when it's real, the person we suddenly love so different from the love-image we've held, and yet despite all the superficial things they ~are~ that person..... Well...I just got caught going right into a poem's message, as though it came to me without the words at all...a mark of excellence in writing! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
I don't need much-- just meet of me-- and that's too much reality... I need to touch the mirror'd me... I need a Hercules-- hold me? I need you be a part of ME. I need you-- need you set me free. Serenity, this is a terrific read (as always). Hugs2u Coco |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Oh, I wish, I wish that for you, too, Serenity. I feel it, lady....you know I do. I quite like the way your romantic and vulnerable side writes itself out, btw. *hugs* ...jojo |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
One of my favorites. Just wanted to bring it back. martyjo |
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Musicmaker1969
since 2000-06-25
Posts 589Peterborough, Ontario Canada |
Yes, I fully understand this longing. I was once in love with a wonderful man, just like you describe here, but 3 months before we were to be married, he disappeared without a trace. All he left behind in his apartments were the tokens of love I had given him. I don't know if he is dead or alive, but I have never loved another like that since. I got married and 1 1/2 years later, divorced. I too long for this love again. Very well done. Sheri Adams Jesus lives in my heart! He can in yours too!!! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Some time ago, I read this poem you wrote, and at that time it touched my heart, and here I am, once again, gravitating back to the pages of ago embracing these gems that I have enjoyed! coco |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is one that surprises me, continuously. I felt helpless writing it. I feel helpless re-reading it. I'm just sorry so many can relate. wow. and I'm sorry... |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
another boost, just because. "late" |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
dang!!! (thanking Martyjo for boosting, for I had never read this.) Karen, it resonates deeply |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Musicmaker1969, Today I found out the reason my hairdreser has not been to her salon is because her daughter's 28 year old fiance just took his life. His wake was this afternoon. They had bought a home together and moved in and were to be married in 2008. I have no particulars, but what a horrible thing to do to the girl,her family, his family and all involved. I feel for you. A huge hurt that had to be. Sincerely , "late" |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Serenity, This poem of yours is so good and brings so much to others that it has to be bumped every so often. I am happy Kacy (midnightsun) had a chance to read it. [This message has been edited by latearrival (11-01-2007 03:39 AM).] |
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