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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley

0 posted 2002-06-04 11:28 PM




Fear not weary poet
for I do not read your heart
Put away your palpitations
you have eluded cupid’s dart

Turn away from me
move with your usual haste
these words are not meant
to impale your soul in chaste

If I had turned left
and you had driven to the right
chances are our muses would
have met one stormy night

But fate has conspired
that we have yet to rendezvous
perhaps it’s for the best then
perhaps we weren’t supposed to


© Copyright 2002 Poet deVine - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-06-05 01:00 AM


I loved this, and hope you're feeling better. June feels rotten for me, too.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Poet deVine
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2 posted 2002-06-05 03:43 AM


Are you ok?
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3 posted 2002-06-05 03:56 AM


sigh...I think we are all a bit weary...

fear not good poets, mercury goes direct June 9!!!!

okay...just shrug that off as one of my "trips" but just you wait...

Sharon? I loved the poem and understood the mood, but? there's is something so...RETICENT about this...yep...you need a crepe skirt and a black beret...and maybe even some bongos!!! heh heh

Poet deVine
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4 posted 2002-06-05 09:15 AM


LOL Somehow I don't see myself in that get up...I'm SO square/middle of the road!! The strangest outfit I ever wore was one Halloween when I sewed rubber snakes into a long black wig, wore a long black dress and went to a party as Medusa!!
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5 posted 2002-06-06 04:57 PM


it's not time yet. . .

you'll find the time. . . great work. . .

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