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bsquirrel
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0 posted 2002-05-17 11:53 PM


You are the frosting on my cake.
She said this whenever the windshield grew littered with insects --
those glowing, traveling bodies meant to be born and splash across my view.

You're so weird,
I replied.

She said burn ... together.
-TON
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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2002-05-17 11:54 PM

LOL

Ok..we REALLY went north/south with this one..
bsquirrel
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2 posted 2002-05-17 11:55 PM

That poem should have been called "Reaching, searching, straining ... FAILING!" *laughs*

She said burn ... together.
-TON
Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration
3 posted 2002-05-18 12:02 PM

ok - this was funny too!
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2002-05-18 05:29 AM

*s
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