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bsquirrel
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0 posted 2002-05-17 10:59 PM


-Shadowplay-
I asked the sky for its advice.
How do I stop my shadow's glance?
She seems to follow everywhere.
Even in sun, she walks along.

The sky did not reply, you see --
it was only blue air, a concave eye.
I was perplexed at the convexity
(just she again, distorting view)

I decided it was time for a talk.
I stopped my walk, and whispered to her.
She seemed to understand my gait.
She walked on. I disappeared.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2002-05-17 11:01 PM



I am the shadow of you
hidden by the moon's glow
but rise of sun will see me
follow wherever you go


Marsha
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2 posted 2002-05-17 11:11 PM


Mike darling heart this is wonderful. This is a very special piece from you darling boy, incredible writing full of such beauty. I love it, It’s wonderful to see you work absolutely wonderful. I love it utterly utterly love it How can you call this lacklustre


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

  

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


bsquirrel
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3 posted 2002-05-18 03:08 PM


I'm glad you enjoyed it so much, Mushy. I guess I shouldn't trust my own judgments on my stuff -- ever.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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