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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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Okay, this is with nothing previous in my head, no idea what I'm going to write about AAANNNND four minutes before I drive home from work. So let's see what I'm good for ... Let me have your light, my midnight. Let me have your shape, my shoreline. Let me have your mouth, my river. You can have my arrow and quiver. Hmm.... not much is it? I'll try to do better when I log in again later. Mikey She said burn ... together. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
No it's pretty good..borders on Adult..a slip of the tongue and you'd be moved!! LOL |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I wouldn't say it's not much..that quivering arrow kind of got to me ..*s oops that was arrow and quiver wasn't it my mistake bsq  M |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Glad to make y' smile, Maureen.  She said burn ... together. |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
heh, hail bsquirrel.. ^_^ This is brilliant, what a cleverly naughty mind you have... .. erhm.. .. -Lynne It's nice to share - kiss someone when you have a cold. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Heh heh. Yes, glad to have you in my army (hail bsquirrel).  Cute, Lynne. I appreciate yr comments.She said burn ... together. |
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