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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley

0 posted 2002-05-17 08:07 PM



Shocked at the trust betrayed
I stood alone as my body swayed
dry mouthed I heard the story
felt lies smudge upon this glory

a lie isn't a blade
but cuts much deeper
into the heart

a lie turns around
and slaps your face
tearing your soul apart

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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
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1 posted 2002-05-17 08:36 PM


ooooo, ouch.
that just SOUNDS like it hurt.

want a cup of coffee? it'll help...
-Dave

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2002-05-17 08:41 PM


a lie turns around
and slaps your face

certainly like that line *s

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (05-17-2002 08:58 PM).]

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
3 posted 2002-05-17 08:49 PM


There is a true story behind this ... it was my day at work. A lesson was learned, I can tell you that. And my trustful nature just took 17 steps BACK.
nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2002-05-17 08:59 PM


I still have trouble with my trusting nature...it gets me into trouble wayyyy too often..
M

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