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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I am overcome with insistance of yearning to jump freely from myself into abandon-- be damned the cautionary rail! Stifle the warnings of hands in cart... They melt the sprout of wings through a lack of faith, and shift the waters I walk, allowing me to sink... I need to fall-- if only to discover if the ground be my demise or perhaps? I could have flown... |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Step back K, step back!!! I'm gettin' that "edgy" feelin' now, dang it! I have this theory . . . that this comes from an ancient part of the brain, a part that was important when we were swingin' through the trees. Edges weren't edges then, just spaces between branches . . . Go ahead . . . tell me I'm nuts . . . everybody else does. "As soon as the generals and the politicos can predict the motions of your mind, lose it." Wendell Berry |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Love Krawdad's theory. Think I agree. Yep, it's an edge. Step off, don't step off. Either way, it can be the scariest thing ya ever do. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Karen, Wanna hold hands?  It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
Enjoyed the {censored} out of this. Damn, girlie... when did we start sharing brains? Missed you, s'en... you ever around to chat these days? Let me know... I'm moving come Sunday. ((Hugs)) witchy tree talker |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey...this was good for me, and I hope it was good for YOU.  Very nice, to have a party, and so many great friends show up! (and so understanding too!  )Love you all... "e" especially..lol, funny man  oh and meg? Call me. [This message has been edited by serenity (04-18-2002 04:40 AM).] |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
I'm pleased. Very pleased. I am so glad I came back to PiP so I could read works like this! Fabulous! Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
I'd be stoked to... you know, if I had your number or somthin'... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Oh Wow...I'll e you, miss E!!! And JP? I'm so pleased you are pleased. That one was for YOU, yanno. Inspired by your poem. (Did some of that thinking I did not want to do!) So...thank YOU! |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
"men weren't meant to fly, with clouds between their knees" Superman--Five For Fighting There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. byron [This message has been edited by Jamie (04-18-2002 11:58 PM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Jamie? I like that much... (I was wondering where you were) hmmm...clouds between the knees, eh? I'll restrain myself. (kinky that way) It's great to see you again! |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Oh! I love this Serenity. Something I can identify with..I love this: "Stifle the warnings of hands in cart... They melt the sprout of wings" -Lynne It's nice to share - kiss someone when you have a cold. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
You've never written a bad poem. Or, rather, you've never written a bad poem that you've posted! You ROCK, S'en. Just out and out rock.  Amen. She said burn ... together. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Smiling...fly??? Shucks girl, you soar!!!! |
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