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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Tis just a glance a flickering a smile in gleam of eye a sigh so soft it’s often missed unheard by passerby What measure can I take of words for this attraction this list will grow will gain length in poetic distraction Tis not just one thing one moment that holds me to your side but count them? I cannot for surely I have tried |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
What measure can I take of words for this attraction this list will grow will gain length in poetic distraction ================================ Careful now Ms Divine ... some one might mistake you for a moth  *L*You know I LOVE this one....very cool poem... nothing like a pretty blue flame to inspire us  Its not like you to say sorry, |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Ooooh, I like this, I like this! "Tis just a glance" Elegantly understated! And there is something else that I can't quite but my finger on, but enjoying it whatever it is. Will read this many times I'm sure. Thank you, PdV e |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Laughing at JM here...perhaps we should start a club? U.M.---United Moths? Your heart is gently earnest Sharon...and very evident in sincerity. Now, anybody gotta light?  |
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