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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Dreams I dream in show, mountains of snow Equators heat and down below Valleys green and crystalline streams That flows in schemes and fill my dreams. But mostly I dream summer nights And phantom butterfly flights Sail in glory feeling immense Leaving behind, pains of intense Build castles, water and sand with Magic of mind, softness of hand Watch the esprit wash out to sea Gracefully to eternity I’ve opened a door made of awe By transference of mind and store Sail a ship of poetic rhyme Into seas of fantasies time Silly you say, nonsense at play I’m a student. Show me your way? |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I dream in show, mountains of snow Equators heat and down below Valleys green and crystalline streams That flows in schemes and fill my dreams. But mostly I dream summer nights And phantom butterfly flights Sail in glory feeling immense Leaving behind, pains of intense Build castles, water and sand with Magic of mind, softness of hand Watch the esprit wash out to sea Gracefully to eternity ==================================== You a "student" ...yeah right .... thats like saying the Pope is just an alterboy. *L* You're no student...Youre the Zen Master...the Sensi .... and we grasshoppers study your rhymes divine and read your wisdom handed down thru time...and then we too dream in glory's rhyme scheme. "Sail a ship of poetic rhyme Into seas of fantasies time" I'll sail with you anytime ... anywhere .... me Gilligan ... you the Skipper LOL  *winkiewinkie* Goodmorning sweet Stinky  |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sy, loved the soft and low images in this one Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour there are writers and there are WRITERS, YOU are one of the later. An absoulutely divine conjuror of poetic delight and wonderful rhyme. Utterly UTTERLY beautiful, I'd quote you this line or that line but in truth I love it all. Utterly fabulous writing I salute you master writer. As always Mushy    To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
LOL at JM's "alter boy"...you keep teaching Sy...we are all apt and willing pupils... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love to dream, and lately I've always been dreaming of my dream girl Joanna, who I love so very much, and kissing her in fantasy worlds and in Eden! (big huggsssss) I love it, sweet friend, it's always a delight to watch as you share your dream with us all, we all love you so much! This is fabulous, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sorry I didn't get to answer your wonderful comments but I've been in bed most of the day. Hoping for a better day tomorrow. Thanks again. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (01-14-2002 08:53 PM).] |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy--You cannot stay in bed..with poems running through your head! Get up, get up, I must insist..for you must know that you are missed. Loved this poem, Sy..and hope you feel better soon! Hugs! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Enjoyed this one so much Sy! Now get outta that bed...your muse wants to write! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
This really has a magic about it....lovely thoughts and words....  Lauren~ Tomorrow's another day |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
seymour, this is lovely, Oh I could just see all your dreams. great write. floria |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"I’ve opened a door made of awe By transference of mind and store Sail a ship of poetic rhyme Into seas of fantasies time" Your words have sailed far, to northern shores, where you now share them with distant others, and open more doors. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
a perfect poem to read before I say goodnight.... thank you, Seymour.... Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
To my precious readers I once more apologize And martie I was inspired to write, just read my Will or Testiment. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Hope your feeling better today, Sy...it is beautiful and snowy here in Michigan... I loved your beautiful poem!  copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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